HEART BREAKS INTERSECTION
we've resorted back to the starting line
which only makes for a tougher climb
to re-gain a love off a damaged vine
will take some time to re-design
as messy as this path has got
it's lessons that we've learned and taught
emotions care to much to stop
but did we truly give it all we got
life’s concerned with no direction
stranded in heart breaks intersection
as I ponder natures next intention
I realize that love is the best invention
although it hurts from time to time
it's truly the soul's internal drive
it reasons not with the mind
when love's involved, it's truly blind
will we cross the finish line as one
growing old ... under the sun
recovering from times so troublesome
or has failure already one
Copyright (C) Angel Campbell
I like this very much--there are some tremendous lines here. I am not usually a fan of the rhymed, but you carry it off with great conviction.
ReplyDeleteAs I dive deeper into the twittering world I've seen a wide variety of how people create poetry. I guess some are for the ryhme scheme and sum feel it makes the poems feel forced. For some reason rhyming my emotions and feelings have always come naturally and easily. I have a few non-rhyming but most seem to fall into this scheme... Thanx for takin the time to read my work .. I really appreciate it!!
ReplyDeleteAngel...I'm honored you wanted me to read this...I'm not big for rhyme outside the context of music, so I tried to put it to a melody as I read it. It runs with biting pain...if anything I think should have a chorus throughout it. Well done...rasmithii
ReplyDeleteThanx Ras!! - I guess being a musician I kind of indirectly set it to some sort of melody. I like my poetry to have a flowing sense about it. Thanx for checkin out my work and takin the time to comment on it!!
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